Homework (237)
학생이 쓴 원문
- Do you agree that kids should have cellphones? Why or why not?
I agree with that kids should have cellphones because if they don\'t have cellphones, then they won\'t be able to call their family when they are lost in somewhere.
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I agree with that kids should have cellphones because if they don\'t have cellphones, then they won\'t be able to call their family when they are lost in somewhere.
>>I agree that kids should have cellphones because if they don\'t have cellphones then they won\'t be able to call their family when they are lost somewhere.
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