homework
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In a little house in spain lives a girl called amanda. She has two sisters, lisa and sally, and one brother called fred.
Amanda lives in barcelona in Spain, which is in europe. She has a pen pal called brian who lives in England. She likes to write to brian so she can practice her english. Brian does not know very much spanish, but he is learning a few words. Amanda would like to go visit brian in london when she is older. Most of all she would like to visit new york.
Amanda has a small dog called pete. He is a dachshund. When she takes pete to the park she likes to throw him a ball.
There is a famous park in barcelona called park guell. The park has houses that look like they come from the hansel and gretel story. Amanda and pete like it very much.
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Hello baby, good afternoon!
How are you feeling now? I do hope you feel much more confident of yourself because you are a very generous student.
Bear in mind that you are different from the others so please do your best in doing so.
Here are the modifications I made for you my dear. All PROPER NOUNS should be written in capital letters.
Take care always baby and Happy New Year!
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
Chaged the Words...>>I cahnged some words.In a little house in spain lives a girl called amanda.
>>In a little house is Spain lives a girl called Amanda.
She has two sisters, lisa and sally, and one brother called fred.>>She has two sister, Lisa and Sally, and one brother called Fred.Amanda lives in barcelona in Spain, which is in europe.
>>Amanda lives in Barcelona in Spain, which is in Europe.
She has a pen pal called brian who lives in England.
>>She has a pen pal called Brian who lives in England,
She likes to write to brian so she can practice her english.
>>She likes to write to Brian so she can practice her English.
Brian does not know very much spanish, but he is learning a few words.
>>Brian does not know very much Spanish, but he is learning a few words.
Amanda would like to go visit brian in london when she is older.
>>Amada would like to go visit Brian in London when she is older.
Most of all she would like to visit new york.>>Most of all she would like to visit New York.Amanda has a small dog called pete.
>>Amanda has a small dog called Pete.
He is a dachshund.
>>correct
When she takes pete to the park she likes to throw him a ball. >>When she takes Pete to the park she likes to throw him a ball.There is a famous park in barcelona called park guell.
>>There is a famou park in Barcelona called Park Guell.
The park has houses that look like they come from the hansel and gretel story.
>>The park has houses that look like they come from the Hansel and Gretel story.
Amanda and pete like it very much.
>>Amanda and Pete like it very much.
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