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After 4 months, I will discharge from military service. I will work at hospital. I have not exerted my ability for 3 years at military service. So I will learn for medicine. I want to be a respectable doctor. I will treat many patients kindly. And I hope my family be happy and healthy.

Hello there! ^^, Happy New Year! How are you? I finished checking your composition and I wrote down my corrections for you. It is short and simple but it\'s really meaningful. Great job with your vocabulary and grammar. Take care always and see you in class! T. Jane After 4 months, I will discharge from military service. >>After four months, I will be discharge from military service. I will work at hospital. >>I will work in a hospital. I have not exerted my ability for 3 years at military service. >>I have not yet exerted my abilities for three years in the military service. So I will learn for medicine. >>So, I will study medicine. I want to be a respectable doctor. >>Correct! I will treat many patients kindly. >>Correct! And I hope my family be happy and healthy. >>And I hope my family to be happy and healthy.