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Too many people have planed new year's resolution every end of year. But, most of them do not continue because, in my opinion, they contain too many things and widely as I did. So, I planed specific and not too much big for this year. Above all, me and my wife must go to Busan and Jeju-island with baby in this year. I know it's uncomfortable but, we want to go together. It will be our first time. My baby is too young, so we didn't go together anywhere until now. Especially, me and my wife haven't visited to Busan because of far my town. Travel is chance to experience other cultures, to meet new people that's the reason why I like travel. Even though, my baby is too young to travel, I believe travel is helpful for her life. To understanding different cultures is very important.

Hello there! HAPPY NEW YEAR!! Thank you so much for sending me your compistion tonight. I made some corrections, kindly review them. By the way, travelling with family is really one of the greatest thing to do. I hope that you will be able to do do it this year. Good night! ~T. Jeny Too many people have planed new year\'s resolution every end of year. >>Too many people make their New Year\'s resolution every end of a year. But, most of them do not continue because, in my opinion, they contain too many things and widely as I did. >>But most of them do not do their resolutions because, in my opinion, they have a lot of things to accomplish as I do. So, I planed specific and not too much big for this year. >>Therefore, I planned to do specific things and not too much big for this year.Above all, me and my wife must go to Busan and Jeju-island with baby in this year. >>Above all, me and my wife must go to Busan and Jeju Island with our baby this year. I know it\'s uncomfortable but, we want to go together. >>I know it will be uncomfortable but we want to go together. It will be our first time. >>Correct OR: >>It will be our first time to go out of town as a family. My baby is too young, so we didn\'t go together anywhere until now. >>My baby is too young so we didn\'t go out together anywhere until now.Especially, me and my wife haven\'t visited to Busan because of far my town. >>Aside from that, me and my wife haven\'t visited Busan because it is far from my town. Travel is chance to experience other cultures, to meet new people that\'s the reason why I like travel. >>Travelling is a chance to experience different cultures, to meet new people and that\'s the reason why I like to travel.  Even though, my baby is too young to travel, I believe travel is helpful for her life. >>Even though my baby is too young to travel, I blelieve that it will be helpful for her. To understanding different cultures is very important. >>To understand different cultures is very important.