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2013-01-07 · 첨삭 강사 Aurora

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Hello my teacher, im young gon. I was worried about be more fluent in speaking in english cause the 10 minutes for speaking in english through the phone was so bad as i think. I didn't told you exactly what i want to tell you. Actually, I was so depressed. Anyway.. I'll keep trying to write something. I went to a conglatulatory ceremorny of my professor Park in ShinChoen to meet my older alumnus and professor @ 6 pm on Saturday. I was late a little bit case woke up @ 5: 20. I shouldn't have woken up 20 minutes early for getting there on time. Many alumnuses were glad to me although I was late a little bit. And, a chairperson asked me to celebrate our professor by anything such as sing a song or dancing. (Give me your e-mail... That I want to write more any sentenses needed to be corrected is excced to this page limit...)

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Hello again Young Gon!  I completely understand your concern. 10 minutes is indeed to short to improve your English skills. I will try as much as I can to let you speak more in English during our class time, but as you already know, you also need to study more before and after our classes. I\'m sorry I can\'t give you my e-mail since we\'re not allowed to send our personal e-mails to our students.  Anyway, I\'ll be happy to check your compositions for you, as always. Till next time! T. Aurora Hello my teacher, im young gon. >>Hello my teacher. I\'m Young Gon.I was worried about be more fluent in speaking in english cause the 10 minutes for speaking in english through the phone was so bad as i think. >>I was worried about being more fluent in speaking English because the 10 minutes for speaking English through phone was so bad I think. I didn\'t told you exactly what i want to tell you. >>I didn\'t tell you exactly what I want to tell you. Actually, I was so depressed. >>Correct!Anyway.. I\'ll keep trying to write something. >>Anyway, I\'ll kepp trying to write something.I went to a conglatulatory ceremorny of my professor Park in ShinChoen to meet my older alumnus and professor @ 6 pm on Saturday. >>I went to a congratulatory ceremenoy for professor Park in Shin Choen to meet my older alumni and profesor at 6 PM last Saturday.   (Use the \"on Saturday\" when you are referring to actions that will happen in the future.)   **(We used to have 'alumnus' (male singular), 'alumni' (male plural), 'alumna' (female singular) and 'alumnae' (female plural); but the latter two are now popular only among older female graduates, with the first two terms becoming unisex)**  I was late a little bit case woke up @ 5: 20. >>I was a bit late because I woke up at 5:20. I shouldn\'t have woken up 20 minutes early for getting there on time. >>I should have woken up 20 minutes earlier to get there on time.Many alumnuses were glad to me although I was late a little bit. >>Many alumni were glad to see me even if I was a bit late. And, a chairperson asked me to celebrate our professor by anything such as sing a song or dancing. >>And a chairperson asked me to celebrate with our professor by singing or dancing.(Give me your e-mail... That I want to write more any sentenses needed to be corrected is excced to this page limit...) >>(Give me your e-mail so that I can write more sentences than this page\'s limit.)

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