Homework 24

2019-05-20 · 첨삭 강사 Shelly

학생이 쓴 원문

HOMEWORK: Who do you think is the most beautiful person alive today? I think my mom is most beautiful person. Because I know my mother\'s every aspect of my mother, and I love every aspect of her. So I think my mother is most beautiful person.

강사 첨삭

Hello there Ramie! Happy Monday to you!
Thank you for doing your homework.
I appreciate the effort.
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I think my mom is most beautiful person. 
>> I think my mom is the most beautiful person.
Because I know my mother\'s every aspect of my mother, and I love every aspect of her. 
>> Because I know my mother\'s every aspect and I love it.
So, I think my mother is most beautiful person.
>> So, I think my mother is the most beautiful person.

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