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Hello Jeny. I tried to write a essay about my fear. Check it please. Have a nice day. I feel fear when I am behind the other people. So If there is a very important thing at work, I prepare it few days before because I want do it better than my collegue. Because I am competitive, I am under a lot of pressure. I should accept my limitation to overcome this stressful situation. I am afraid of bees. When I was a teenager, a bee got into my hair. The bee buzzed inside my hair and the sound was very loud. I thought the bee might sting my head so I got into a panic. Since then I feel fear with bees.

Hello there! :) I am grateful that you found time to do your homework and send it over. I finished checking it and I enjoyed reading it. I wrote down my corrections for you to analyze. It is simple but a meaningful composition. Good job for that! Keep up the good work. :) T. Jeny Here are my corrections for you: Hello Jeny. >>Correct!I tried to write a essay about my fear.>>I tried to write an essay about my fear. Check it please. >>Correct!Have a nice day. >>Correct!I feel fear when I am behind the other people. >>I feel scared when I am behind other people.So If there is a very important thing at work, I prepare it few days before because I want do it better than my collegue. >>So, if there is a very important thing at work, I prepare it few days earlier because I want to do it better than my colleagues. Because I am competitive, I am under a lot of pressure. >>It is because I am competitive, I am under a lot of pressure.I should accept my limitation to overcome this stressful situation. >>Correct!I am afraid of bees. >>Correct! When I was a teenager, a bee got into my hair. >>Correct!The bee buzzed inside my hair and the sound was very loud. >>Correct! I thought the bee might sting my head so I got into a panic. >>Correct! Since then I feel fear with bees. >>Correct! >>Or Since then I am scared of bees.