Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I was sorry to hear of his mother's death.
The book is covered with dust because she left those in the old barn.
Tokyo is the largest city in the world.
My mother bought a new pair of gloves last week.
Hes car does not seem to be badly damaged.
Hi, teacher. I`m [이름]. I'm not sure if my answers is correct or not. Would you mind if I ask you a question?
I want to be more natural to use the 'be' verb and 'does' verb when I ask something.
Is it getting better if I use those or think what I want to ask you?
It takes a liitle bit to make some sentences that I want to ask you.
I've tried to reserve some classes which can help me improving my work skills on android.
Classes I reserved will be opening on the lask week each month by April, but other one class hasn't approved with my manager yet since I requested the class.
I've thought of studying through the phone. It is very useful for me to upgrade my writting skills due to modifying my sentenses from my teacher. I really like this.
Actually, I recived a call to ask me how it was going. I told her that I've been much satisfied with all of them exept one, which is about page limit. I asked her to write more sentences than 1000 word so that I can practive writting skills by putting down what I want to tell you (This is the thins that you asked me). Her has allowed me to write more words by 1500 word. It seems to be so much. I talked to her with those.
With kind regards, Yours..(I've learnd before about idiom)
강사 첨삭
Hello once again [이름]. Are you having a great day so far? Well I hope you are. ^-^ Regardless of whichever part of English you\'d like to improve on, the best way to do so is to just keep practice. If you want to use \"do\" or \"does\" in a questions then practice using them in class. If it\'s too difficult then try to write down the questions in advance. ^^ I\'m so happy of your commitment in improving your skills.
T. Aurora
I was sorry to hear of his mother\'s death.
>>Correct!The book is covered with dust because she left those in the old barn.
>>Correct!Tokyo is the largest city in the world.
>>Correct!My mother bought a new pair of gloves last week.
>>Correct!Hes car does not seem to be badly damaged.>>Correct!Hi, teacher. I`m [이름].
>>Hi teacher. I\'m [이름].
I\'m not sure if my answers is correct or not.
>>I\'m not sure if my answers are correct or not.
Would you mind if I ask you a question?
>>Do you mind if I ask you a question?I want to be more natural to use the \'be\' verb and \'does\' verb when I ask something.
>>Correct!Is it getting better if I use those or think what I want to ask you?
>>Will I get better if I use those or if I think of questions to ask you?It takes a liitle bit to make some sentences that I want to ask you.>>It takes a while to make some sentences that I want to ask you.I\'ve tried to reserve some classes which can help me improving my work skills on android.
>>I\'ve tried to reserve some classes which can help me improve my work skills on my android.Classes I reserved will be opening on the lask week each month by April, but other one class hasn\'t approved with my manager yet since I requested the class.
>>Classes I reserved will be opening on the lask week of each month by April, but other classes haven\'t been approved by my manager yet since I requested the class. I\'ve thought of studying through the phone.
>>I thought of studying through the phone.
It is very useful for me to upgrade my writting skills due to modifying my sentenses from my teacher.
>>My writing skills will upgrade with my teacher modifying my sentences.
>>It is very useful to upgrade my writing skill by having my sentences modified by my teacher.
I really like this.>>Correct!Actually, I recived a call to ask me how it was going.
>>Actually, I received a call asking me how it was going.
I told her that I\'ve been much satisfied with all of them exept one, which is about page limit.
>> I told her that I\'ve been much satisfied with all of them exept one, which is about page limit.
I asked her to write more sentences than 1000 word so that I can practive writting skills by putting down what I want to tell you (This is the thins that you asked me).
>>I asked her if I could write more than 1000 words so that I can practice my writing skills by putting down what I want to tell you (This is the things that you asked me).
Her has allowed me to write more words by 1500 word.
>>She has allowed me to write 1500 words.
It seems to be so much.
>>Correct!
I talked to her with those.>>I talked to her about those.With kind regards, Yours..(I\'ve learnd before about idiom) >>With kind regards. (I learned about this idiom before.)
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