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2013-01-09 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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Since nature was polluted by people, recycling must need not only people but animals for better life. Nature is not ours' so we have to save and to clean it, but some people don't have interest of nature pollution. They used too much bad gases, throwed trashes anywhere, cut trees etc. As a result, nature pollution is deteriorated until today. It's more serious than we think. Luckily, many citizens and companies have interest to save nature so that they recommend to use recycling products. Those products of quality are very good, cheaper and useful so, I like to using that. Nowadays, to use recycling products is essential. I hope more people should join these campaigns.

강사 첨삭

A great Midweek to us! I feel great that you are one of the supporters of saving the environment against harmful elements. Our world needs a lot of people like you who cared. Thank you so much on sharing your thoughts. ---T. Jeny   Since nature was polluted by people, recycling must need not only people but animals for better life. >> Since nature was polluted by people, recycling is a must not only for people but also for the animals for a better life. Nature is not ours\' so we have to save and to clean it, but some people don\'t have interest of nature pollution. >> Nature is not ours so we have to save and to clean it, but some people don\'t have interest of nature conservation. They used too much bad gases, throwed trashes anywhere, cut trees etc. >> They used too much bad chemicals, threw trashes anywhere, cut trees etc. As a result, nature pollution is deteriorated until today. >> As a result, nature pollution is not deteriorating until today. It\'s more serious than we think. >> It\'s more serious than we think it is.Luckily, many citizens and companies have interest to save nature so that they recommend to use recycling products.>> Luckily, many citizens and companies have interest in saving nature and they recommend to use recyclable products. Those products of quality are very good, cheaper and useful so, I like to using that. >> Those products are with good quality, cheaper and useful. So I like to use them. Nowadays, to use recycling products is essential. >> Nowadays, to use recyclable products is essential. I hope more people should join these campaigns. >> Correct!

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