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Hello there! Thank you so much for answering this question of mine.
I am so glad that you are feeling happy that you are already a father of two kids. Certainly, you have a point when you said that you have your own ups and downs. This is natural. I have mine, too.kkk...
Anyway, you just have to go over the corrections below.
See you!
T.Kristel^^
How do you feel now that you are already a father of two kids?
Explain how you feel.
I have ups and downs.
>> I have my own ups and downs.
One of the best worst is I don\'t have free time.
>> One of the best/worst among these is that I don\'t have a free-time.
I sad these routine life until when my child grow up.
>> I\'m sad that this routine will go on until my child grows up.
However sometimes I feel good.
>> Correct
OR >> However, sometimes, I feel good.
My son cute when strange speaking languae when start the language.
>> My son is cute when he speaks in a strange language, since he is still learning how to speak.
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