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2013-01-10 · 첨삭 강사 Joan

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Comprehension Questions 1. What does the UN celebrate on Ocober 1st? The UN released a report of Day of Older Persons. 2. According to the UN, how many people over age 60 will be living by 2050? It will be ten billion peoples. 3. What is changing in countries like Japan, China, and India? The young people taking in their aging parents is in decline.

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Hi [이름]^^ Good job for tonight! Well, I advise you to always try to answer in complete sentences. Check this things out!^^ T. Joan Comprehension Questions1. What does the UN celebrate on Ocober 1st?>> What does the UN celebrate on October 1st?The UN released a report of Day of Older Persons.>>On October 1st the UN celebrates International Day of Older Persons. 2. According to the UN, how many people over age 60 will be living by 2050?It will be ten billion peoples.>> It will be ten billion people. OR >>According to the UN, there will be about 2 billion people over age 60 by 2050. 3. What is changing in countries like Japan, China, and India?The young people taking in their aging parents is in decline. >> The young people taking in their aging parents is declining. OR >>In these countries it is not as common as it used to be for children to take in their elderly parents.

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