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I love my passion for everything. My friends told me that I am very passionate person, I always do my best for everything. Especially, I like my passion for study. In Korea, almost student don't think about their dream. They are just studying instead of dreaming. However, I was dreaming when I was studying. Therefore, I studied biology with passion. I believe my passion made me accepted GSHS, SNU, and it will make me a professor.

Hello there!! Happy Friday!!~ Thanks for doing this composition for me. :) Indeed passion is necessary for us to enjoy everything that we\'re doing and to make us feel satisfied and fulfilled at the same time... :) Kindly check the corrections I made for you! :) Have a great day and see you in class! T.Alice I love my passion for everything. My friends told me that I am very passionate person, I always do my best for everything. >>CORRECT!! My friends told me that I am a very passionate person and I always do my best in everything.  Especially, I like my passion for study. In Korea, almost student don\'t think about their dream. >>Especially, I like my passion in studying. In Korea, most students don\'t think about their dreams. They are just studying instead of dreaming. However, I was dreaming when I was studying. >>CORRECT!! CORRECT!!  Therefore, I studied biology with passion. I believe my passion made me accepted GSHS, SNU, and it will make me a professor. >>CORRECT!! I believe my passion made me be accepted in GSHS,SNU and it will make me a professor someday.