Homework

2013-01-11 · 첨삭 강사 Kate

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Please make a creative composition on "List the 5 major goals you want to achieve/reach this 2013 Make a new friends. Grow up 10cm. Study hard. Not angry. Not cry.

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Hello there, [이름]! It\'s nice to see that despite of your busy schedule, you still find time to accomplish your homework. It shows that your interest in empowering your English is at peak. Great Job! I\'ll see you in two days :) T. Kate^^ Here are my corrections for you: HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:Please make a creative composition on \"List the 5 major goals you want to achieve/reach this 2013Make a new friends.>> I want to have new friends. (Better)Grow up 10cm.>> I want to have additional 10cm in my height. (Better)Study hard.>> I will study hard. (Better)Not angry.>> I will not easily get angry. (Better)Not cry. >> I will no longer cry. (Better)

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