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People capacities very surprise. We can make a car, train and airplane which can make a comfortable and fast when we move. 100 years ago, it cannot imagine. We can make a smart phone and smart computer which can make better comfortable our life. I said to you that people can control most of industies and developed until now. But, we cannot control natural calamities. We can expect a little bit when or where can happen some natural calamities and then we can just move other places or pray for god. Korea is so safe from natural calamities so that I don't know about how do I feel when earthquake or volcano happend. But, I heard some people who survived those calamities that it's horrible. Nature force is very strong as you know so, we try to take care of earth. Save the water and trees.

Hi there! Thank you for your composition. I hope my corrections will be helpful to you. We can talk about it some more during class if you wish. I will talk to you tomorrow. ----T. Jeny------   People capacities very surprise. >>People\'s capacities are very surprising. We can make a car, train and airplane which can make a comfortable and fast when we move. >>We can make a car, a train and an airplane which can make moving comfortable and fast. 100 years ago, it cannot imagine. >>A hundred years ago, this was unimaginable.  We can make a smart phone and smart computer which can make better comfortable our life. >>We can make a smart phone and a smart computer which makes our lives better and more comfortable.I said to you that people can control most of industies and developed until now. >>I told you how people can control most industries and developments until now. But, we cannot control natural calamities. >>CORRECT We can expect a little bit when or where can happen some natural calamities and then we can just move other places or pray for god. >>We can expect when or where the natural calamity can happen and then we can just move to another safer place or pray to God.  Korea is so safe from natural calamities so that I don\'t know about how do I feel when earthquake or volcano happend. >>Korea is so safe from natural calamities so that I don\'t know how I would feel when an earthquake hits or when a volcano erupts. But, I heard some people who survived those calamities that it\'s horrible. >>But I heard from some people who survived  from such calamities that it was horrible.Nature force is very strong as you know so, we try to take care of earth. >>As you know, nature\'s force is very strong so we should try to take care of earth. Save the water and trees. >>Correct.