Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Please make a creative composition on "Do you agree that one MUST learn English to be competitive in the society? Explain why?"
I agree.
So many men is learn English.
Many people make society.
강사 첨삭
Happy Monday!
What a great job you\'ve done today, [이름]! Anyway, for today, I would like to thank you again for the positive attitude you have towards English. It\'s not hard to be passionate about something, but it really takes passion to succeed. Keep it up! Keep it burning. I placed some tips and explanation on your corrections. Please feel free to go over them. See you! Take care.
~T. Kate^^
Here are my corrections for you:
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:Please make a creative composition on \"Do you agree that one MUST learn English to be competitive in the society? Explain why?\"I agree.>> Correct
So many men is learn English.>> DID YOU MEAN: People should learn how to speak English.
Many people make society. >> DID YOU MEAN: People should be involved in the society.
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