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2013-01-16 · 첨삭 강사 Kristel

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Why do you thing is it necessary for your daughter to have her regular check ups and her vaccine? Because the baby's weak immunity. If they don't regular check up and get a shot, they don't know something happen afterward. So, it's necessary.

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Hi there! :) I am honored to have you a diligent student like you. You finished your homework and I am thankful for that. I finished checking it and I wrote down my corrections for you to analyze. You take care always and talk to you soon! T. Kristel Why do you thing is it necessary for your daughter to have her regular check ups and her vaccine?Because the baby\'s weak immunity. >>DID YOU MEAN: It is because of the baby\'s weak immunity. OR: It is because the baby has weak immunity.If they don\'t regular check up and get a shot, they don\'t know something happen afterward. >>DID YOU MEAN: If they don\'t have regular check-up and get a shot, we don\'t know if something will happen to them afterwards.So, it\'s necessary. >>Correct! OR: So, it\'s necessary to have their regular check-up and get their shot.

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