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2013-01-16 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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Hi, Jane~ This is my homework 1. Last weekend, I went to the SNUH(Seoul National University Hospital) for chek up my younger sister's ear situation after surgery. 2. I'd love to go on a backpacking trip, especially Italia and Checo in Europe. 3. Next month, I'll go to the temapark(Lotte World) with my boyfriend~ Jane, I read your tips for my English speech. I think that translating Korean news articles into English news articles is really help to build up my writing skills. Thanks. I'm going to do it! And I heard you were a sick on today. Did you have a cold? I really hope that your statement get better. Please take care~

강사 첨삭

Hi there! I really appreciate it that you did your homework. Keep it up! I really enjoyed reading your homework. I wrote down my corrections for you to analyze. Take care and talk to you soon! :) T. Jane Hi, Jane~This is my homework>>Correct!1. Last weekend, I went to the SNUH(Seoul National University Hospital) for chek up my younger sister\'s ear situation after surgery.>>Last weekend, I went to the SNUH (Seoul National University Hospital) for the check-up of my younger sister\'s ear that was operated.2. I\'d love to go on a backpacking trip, especially Italia and Checo in Europe.>>Correct!3. Next month, I\'ll go to the temapark(Lotte World) with my boyfriend~>>Correct!Jane, I read your tips for my English speech. >>Correct!I think that translating Korean news articles into English news articles is really help to build up my writing skills. >>I think that translating Korean news articles into English is really helpful in building up my writing skill.Thanks. I\'m going to do it!>>Correct!And I heard you were a sick on today.>>And I heard you are sick today. Did you have a cold? >>Correct!I really hope that your statement get better. >>Correct! DID YOU MEAN: I really hope that your situation will be better.Please take care~ >>Correct!

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