Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi, Jane~
This is my homework
1. Last weekend, I went to the SNUH(Seoul National University Hospital) for chek up my younger sister's ear situation after surgery.
2. I'd love to go on a backpacking trip, especially Italia and Checo in Europe.
3. Next month, I'll go to the temapark(Lotte World) with my boyfriend~
Jane, I read your tips for my English speech.
I think that translating Korean news articles into English news articles is really help to build up my writing skills.
Thanks. I'm going to do it!
And I heard you were a sick on today.
Did you have a cold?
I really hope that your statement get better.
Please take care~
강사 첨삭
Hi there!
I really appreciate it that you did your homework.
Keep it up! I really enjoyed reading your homework.
I wrote down my corrections for you to analyze.
Take care and talk to you soon! :)
T. Jane
Hi, Jane~This is my homework>>Correct!1. Last weekend, I went to the SNUH(Seoul National University Hospital) for chek up my younger sister\'s ear situation after surgery.>>Last weekend, I went to the SNUH (Seoul National University Hospital) for the check-up of my younger sister\'s ear that was operated.2. I\'d love to go on a backpacking trip, especially Italia and Checo in Europe.>>Correct!3. Next month, I\'ll go to the temapark(Lotte World) with my boyfriend~>>Correct!Jane, I read your tips for my English speech.
>>Correct!I think that translating Korean news articles into English news articles is really help to build up my writing skills.
>>I think that translating Korean news articles into English is really helpful in building up my writing skill.Thanks. I\'m going to do it!>>Correct!And I heard you were a sick on today.>>And I heard you are sick today.
Did you have a cold?
>>Correct!I really hope that your statement get better.
>>Correct! DID YOU MEAN: I really hope that your situation will be better.Please take care~
>>Correct!
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