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2013-01-17 · 첨삭 강사 Kristel

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What object or thing could make you feel very happy and satisfied? If I could have a lot of money I will be happy. My familys always healthy than I will be happy. My chil will be good persons than I will be satisfied. I hope my child will be rich. In summary, My happy is a lot of money and healthy.

강사 첨삭

Hello there! :) It\'s really great that you were able to do your homework. I really appreciate it. Keep it up! :) Well, I finished checking it and I wrote down my corrections for you to analyze. Take care always and talk to you in class! :) T. Kristel What object or thing could make you feel very happy and satisfied?If I could have a lot of money I will be happy. >>Correct! ^^,My familys always healthy than I will be happy. >>If my family will always stay healthy, then I will be happy.My chil will be good persons than I will be satisfied. >>If my children will be good people, then I will be satisfied.I hope my child will be rich. >>I hope my children would become rich! ^^,In summary, My happy is a lot of money and healthy. >>In summary, my happiness are lots of money and good health.

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