homework
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What object or thing could make you feel very happy and satisfied?
If I could have a lot of money I will be happy.
My familys always healthy than I will be happy.
My chil will be good persons than I will be satisfied.
I hope my child will be rich.
In summary, My happy is a lot of money and healthy.
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What object or thing could make you feel very happy and satisfied?If I could have a lot of money I will be happy.
>>Correct! ^^,My familys always healthy than I will be happy.
>>If my family will always stay healthy, then I will be happy.My chil will be good persons than I will be satisfied.
>>If my children will be good people, then I will be satisfied.I hope my child will be rich.
>>I hope my children would become rich! ^^,In summary, My happy is a lot of money and healthy.
>>In summary, my happiness are lots of money and good health.
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