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2013-01-18 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

학생이 쓴 원문

To make me of annoying is rude. Some of people who have high position or older than me seniors would rude sometimes. Of course, I understand they're comfortable when they talk with me so that they can rude. But, if often, I will angry. I don't like these people. I think people should be humble and kind regardless of people's age and gender.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름],

Being humble and kind is a special gift from God.I know you can handle this kind of situations with your colleagues because you can understand that in return you have a big reward in heaven.

T. Jeny 

To make me of annoying is rude.

>>To annoy someone is rude.

Some of people who have high position or older than me seniors would rude sometimes.

>>Some people who are in position or older than me are rude sometimes.

Of course, I understand they\'re comfortable when they talk with me so that they can rude.

>>Of course, I understand that they are comfortable talking to me but they can be rude.

But, if often, I will angry. 

>>But I often feel angry.

I don\'t like these people.

>>correct

>>I don\'t like this kind of people.

I think people should be humble and kind regardless of people\'s age and gender.

>>I think people should be humble and kind regardless of age and gender.

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