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Hello [이름],

Finding our right a women in society is a big responsibility in our part. We need to step forward and let the whole see the true value of women in society.

Thank you for expressing you opinion regarding this topic.

T. Jeny

The biggest discrimination issue in Korea is between women and men that gender discrimination.

>>Discrimination between men and women is the biggest issue in Korea.

Women have been discriminated and most of women couldn\'t think what women work together with men, women just take care of children in house.

>>Women were discriminated because their responsibility is just to take care of their children, they even think that they can\'t work with men.

At that time, they think that\'s normal women\'s life.

>>At that time, they think that\'s women\'s normal life.

Since 1980s, women were educated and went to university as much as men.

>>Since 1980s women are educated like men.

Then, women\'s mind changed and could see that women\'s discrimination.

>>They changed their perceptions.

Women tried to start to find their rights.

>> Women started fighting for their rights.

As a result, women take a back some rights but, I think it\'s enough yet. 

>>As a result. they took their right back but I think it\'s not enough.

They try to more effort to find rights.

>>They need to have more effort in finding their rights.