Homework :)
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi teacher! :)
I feel really sorry that I didn't do my homeworkes you gave me before
My interview went smoothly. I had a basic interview at first and then
I got passed with an english interview. But at that time, I thought I screwed my ineterview up. the day after, they called me that you'll have a final interview in Seoul city hall on fri. I had a final in city hall. and "I just got hired"
I'll work at art museum as an english docent and interpreter. it would be a great experience to me. I feel so happy. still got shocked and feel so wired with that.
but the thing i only worry about is that i can't answer yor phone call in time.
So I think I have to change my time scheule like way earier than 12:30 p.m
anyways, I'm so thank you for giving me a luck. and talk to you later :)
Have good day teacher ^.^*
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!!
Thanks for the composition~~ CONGRATULATIONS you made it!!!
I am so happy that you\'re hired! Be more confident of yourself now. kkkk
Anyway, about your class time please try to contact the manager about it.
On the other hand, it was my pleasure wishing you luck and I am definitely so pleased with the result. Good job!
Have a good day dear and see you!
T.Kristel
Hi teacher! :)
>>CORRECT!!I feel really sorry that I didn\'t do my homeworkes you gave me before
>>CORRECT!! Just please take note of the spelling for homeworks.My interview went smoothly. I had a basic interview at first and then I got passed with an english interview.
>>CORRECT!! I had a basic interview at first and then I passed the English interview.
But at that time, I thought I screwed my ineterview up. the day after, they called me that you\'ll have a final interview in Seoul city hall on fri. I had a final in city hall. and \"I just got hired\"
>>CORRECT!! CORRECT!!CORRECT!!CORRECT!! Just be cautious of your spelling like interview. (Great abbreviations)I\'ll work at art museum as an english docent and interpreter. it would be a great experience to me. I feel so happy. still got shocked and feel so wired with that.
>>I\'ll work at an art museum as an English docent and interpreter. It would be a great experience for me. CORRECT!! I\'m still in shock and feels weird with tbat.
but the thing i only worry about is that i can\'t answer yor phone call in time.
>>But there\'s just one thing, I only worry that I might not answer your phone call on time.So I think I have to change my time scheule like way earier than 12:30 p.m
>>CORRECT!! Please check your spelling of schedule.anyways, I\'m so thank you for giving me a luck. and talk to you later :)
>>Anyway, I\'m so thankful for wishing me luck.CORRECT!!Have good day teacher ^.^*
>>CORRECT!!
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