Homework ^^
학생이 쓴 원문
Oh my God.... I accidentally erased my homework I already wrote while reviewing it......
I'll write again anyway. :D
I actually like your way to teach me. So, you can correct my awkward expressions or grammar errors anytime in our class. I won't be uncomfortable with it. Since i have had little time to talk with someone in English, when I try to express my ideas in English, sometimes I have no idea. So, I become speechless. When speaking verbs, adjectives, and adverbs make me get confused because I need time to organize the things in my head first. Need more time means, I think, I need more speaking practice. So, the point is that you can fix or correct my words anytime.
And, here's my though about homework for today.
I don't like taking something lying down. Someone has to take something lying down means that he or she need more power or ability. Once you become a competent or capable person, others cannot tease or bully you. Therefore, this is the easiest way, I think.
강사 첨삭
A pleasant afternoon to you, Summer!
Are you having a great day?
I do hope that you are.
Now, regarding your composition today,
I ought to thank you for voicing out what you have in mind.
I feel so relieved that you don\'t feel upset when you are being cut off during the class.
Well, this sure is one of the best ways to learn.
I forgot to tell you that the space in the writing board is limited to a thousand characters, I think.
Anyway, you can actually share the rest of your answers to me in class.
We are still going to meet tomorrow, right?
I also hope that you enjoyed our mock interview a while ago.
Of course, I am equally hoping that I was of help to you and that you learned something.
You just have to go over the modifications that I made below.
I totally agree that we are sometimes left speechless whenever we are unable to practice the language that we are trying to master.
I actually feel for you to some extent.
I am starting to be emotional now, so I will have to say goodbye.
See you tomorrow, Summer!
-Teacher Klein
P.S.
I knew it!
I was likely wondering where your composition went.
I was about to send this one but then, I was having some difficulties doing so.
Anyway, thank you for sending it in again.
Good thing that I was able to save the first part and so, I just pasted the one that you just sent.
Hi Klein, >> Correct!Actually, I like your way to teach me.
>> Actually, I like the way you teach me.
You can fix my expression or grammar anytime.
>> Correct!
I won\'t feel uncomfortable.
>> Correct!
And, I am ready to go over your comments.
>> Correct!
Since I have little time to talk to someone in English, when I\'m trying to speak something in English, sometimes I don\'t have any idea.
>> Since I have little time to talk with someone in English, when I try to speak in English, sometimes, I space out.
>> I sometimes space out when speaking in English because I don\'t have much opportunity to converse with other people using this language.
So, I become speechless.
>> Correct!
Especially, verbs, adjectives, and adverbs make me get confused.
>> Verbs, adjectives and adverbs confuse me.
>> I get confused with the parts of speech expecially with that of the verbs, adjectives and adverbs.
I am thinking I need more time to construct a sentence.
>> Correct!
It means, eventually, I need more speaking practice.
>> It eventually means that I need more speaking practices.
So, the point is that you can correct my errors in our class. >> Correct!
[Take note that those are merely mistakes. Errors can no longer be changed.
There is this fine line between error and mistake. Many say that these two are synonyms but there is this difference when it comes to degree.]And, here\'s my though about homework.
>> And here\'s my thought about the expression in my homework.I think you should claim your right not to be disturbed or bullied.
>> Correct!
Others might not be able to aware that you get angry until you talk to them.
>> Others may not be aware that you are already angry until you talk to them.
Then, you can get what you want.
>> Correct!
On the other hand, when someone intentionally irritate or bother you, you need to develop your ability.
>> On the other hand, when someone intentionally irritates or bothers you, you need to develop your ability.
>> On the other hand, when someone intentionally irritates or bothers you, you need to develop your ability to ignore them.
>> On the other hand, when someone intentionally irritates or bothers you, you need to develop your ability to tolerate them.
This is because people do not tease capable person.
>> This is because people do not tease capable people.
>> This is because people won\'t tease a capable person.
So, this way is the easiest way not to take something lying d
>> [Too bad the space is limited.]
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Oh my God.... I accidentally erased my homework I already wrote while reviewing it......
>> Oh my God! I accidentally erased my homework while I was reviewing it.I\'ll write again anyway. :D>> I\'ll write it again, anyway.I actually like your way to teach me.
>> I actually like the way you teach me.
So, you can correct my awkward expressions or grammar errors anytime in our class.
>> Correct!
I won\'t be uncomfortable with it.
>> Correct!
OR >> I won\'t feel bad about it.
Since i have had little time to talk with someone in English, when I try to express my ideas in English, sometimes I have no idea.
>> Since I have had little time to talk with someone in English, when I try to express my ideas in English, sometimes, I am dumbfounded.
So, I become speechless.
>> Correct!
When speaking verbs, adjectives, and adverbs make me get confused because I need time to organize the things in my head first.
>> When talking about verbs, adjective, and adverbs, I get donfused because I need time to organize the things in my head first.
>> When talking about verbs, adjective, and adverbs, I get donfused because I need time to organize my thoughts first.
Need more time means, I think, I need more speaking practice.
>> Correct!
So, the point is that you can fix or correct my words anytime. >> Correct!And, here\'s my though about homework for today.
>> And here\'s my thought about the homework for today:I don\'t like taking something lying down.
>> Correct!
Someone has to take something lying down means that he or she need more power or ability.
>> Someone who has to take something lying down means that s/he needs more power or ability.
Once you become a competent or capable person, others cannot tease or bully you.
>> Correct!
Therefore, this is the easiest way, I think.
>> Correct!
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