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2013-01-21 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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T.Jane~ This is my homework If my fiance had an accident and became a paraplegic, I wouldn't marry him. Because I can't afford that situation I think living with him is tragedy to him and I. If I marry him, our life will be filled with sorrow. I hope my wedding life is full of happiness and laugh. In these reasons, I'll never marry the person who had a terrible disease

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Hi there! Thank you so much for doing your homework tonight. You were able to express your thoughts well. By the way, I made some corrections below. Please do read and review them. Have a great night. ~T. Jane T.Jane~This is my homework.>>CorrectIf my fiance had an accident and became a paraplegic, I wouldn\'t marry him. Because I can\'t afford that situation. >>If my fiance had an accident and became Paraplegic, I wouldn\'t marry him because I can\'t afford to be in that sitution. OR: >>If my fiance had an accident and became Paraplegic, I wouldn\'t marry him. I cannot afford to be in that situation.I think living with him is tragedy to him and I. >>I think living with him is a tragic for both him and me.If I marry him, our life will be filled with sorrow. >>CorrectI hope my wedding life is full of happiness and laugh. >>I hope my married life would be full of happiness and laughters.In these reasons, I\'ll never marry the person who had a terrible disease. >>Those are the reason why I\'ll not marry a person who had a terrible disease.

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