homework
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T.Jane~
This is my homework
If my fiance had an accident and became a paraplegic, I wouldn't marry him.
Because I can't afford that situation
I think living with him is tragedy to him and I.
If I marry him, our life will be filled with sorrow.
I hope my wedding life is full of happiness and laugh.
In these reasons, I'll never marry the person who had a terrible disease
강사 첨삭
Hi there!
Thank you so much for doing your homework tonight. You were able to express your thoughts well. By the way, I made some corrections below. Please do read and review them. Have a great night.
~T. Jane
T.Jane~This is my homework.>>CorrectIf my fiance had an accident and became a paraplegic, I wouldn\'t marry him. Because I can\'t afford that situation.
>>If my fiance had an accident and became Paraplegic, I wouldn\'t marry him because I can\'t afford to be in that sitution. OR:
>>If my fiance had an accident and became Paraplegic, I wouldn\'t marry him. I cannot afford to be in that situation.I think living with him is tragedy to him and I.
>>I think living with him is a tragic for both him and me.If I marry him, our life will be filled with sorrow.
>>CorrectI hope my wedding life is full of happiness and laugh.
>>I hope my married life would be full of happiness and laughters.In these reasons, I\'ll never marry the person who had a terrible disease.
>>Those are the reason why I\'ll not marry a person who had a terrible disease.
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