Homework

2013-01-21 · 첨삭 강사 Kate

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello Jeny. It's raining all day. Because of the weather I feel blue but I did my homework. Have a good day! Choose the right words: 1. Good citizens would participate elections in by choosing the candidate they feel they can vote for. 2. Citizens have rights but they must also be aware of their responsibilities towards their community. 3. Good citizens must work for the prosperity of the community they live in. 4. They should also respect the moral norms of the society. 5. Civic engagement is the positive involvement in the affairs of the community.

강사 첨삭

Hello! Thank you so much for sending your homework tonight. I appreciate the effort. Keep up the good start. I would be more than glad to help you out with your English transaction. Have a great day! See you! ~T. Jeny^^ Here are my corrections: Hello Jeny.

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