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2013-01-22 · 첨삭 강사 heidi

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Hi Yesterday It was monday, I c[이름]ged my schedule in knight shift to day shift. Every two weeks My team member have to c[이름]ge our shedule by the rule. A few days ago I normally waked up around 7:00 pm but now I had wake up around 5 am. When I was in mid twenties, It doesn't matter c[이름]ging my schedule. As time goes by 1. Thomas washes the dishes. -> The dishes are washed by Thomas. 2. Frank feeds the dogs. -> The dogs are feed by Frank. 3. Maria prepares the food. -> The food is prepared by Maria. 4. David cleans the kitchen. -> The kitchen was cleaned by David. 5. My father pays the bills. -> The bills was paid by my father. 6. The gardener trims the bushes. -> The bushes are trimed by the gardener. 7. Helen sets the table. -> The table was set by Helen. 8. My mother waters the plants. -> The plants are watered by my mother. 9. Arthur does the laundry. -> The laundry was did by Arthur. 10. My uncle drives us to school. -> We are drived to school by my uncle.

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Hi! It\'s difficult for our body to adjust to shifting schedules. It normally takes 2 weeks for our body to become fully adjusted to our new schedule. I can\'t imagine what it\'s like to have the kind of schedule which keeps on shifting every two weeks. There\'s no time for transition. That\'s the reason why I admire you for having that kind of schedule. Anyway, please check out the corrections below. I\'ll see you later! Take care always. ~~T. Heidi _^-^_ Hi >>>Hi! (It should be accompanied by an exclamation point or a period.)Yesterday It was monday, I c[이름]ged my schedule in knight shift to day shift. >>>Yesterday, I c[이름]ged my schedule from a night shift to a day shift.Every two weeks My team member have to c[이름]ge our shedule by the rule. >>>Every two weeks, my team has to c[이름]ge our schedule as per company policy.A few days ago I normally waked up around 7:00 pm but now I had wake up around 5 am. >>>A few days ago, I normally woke up at around 7:00 pm but now I had to wake up at around 5:00 am.When I was in mid twenties, It doesn\'t matter c[이름]ging my schedule. >>>When I was mid twenties, it didn\'t matter if my schedule was constantly c[이름]ged.As time goes by >>>But as time goes by, I am having a hard time adjusting to my shifting schedule.1. Thomas washes the dishes. -> The dishes are washed by Thomas. >>>Correct!2. Frank feeds the dogs. -> The dogs are feed by Frank. >>>Correct!3. Maria prepares the food. -> The food is prepared by Maria. >>>Correct!4. David cleans bills. -> The the kitchen. -> The kitchen was cleaned by David. >>>The kitchen is cleaned by David.5. My father pays the bills was paid by my father. >>>The bills are paid by my father.6. The gardener trims the bushes. -> The bushes are trimed by the >>>Correct!gardener.7. Helen sets the table. -> The table was set by Helen. >>>The table is set by Helen.8. My mother waters the plants. -> The plants are watered by my mother. >>>Correct!9. Arthur does the laundry. -> The laundry was did by Arthur. >>>The laundry is done by Arthur.10. My uncle drives us to school. -> We are drived to school by my uncle. >>>We are driven to school by my uncle.

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