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2013-01-22 · 첨삭 강사 Donna

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1)many 2)much 3)much 4)many 5)much 6)many 7)much 8)much 9)many 10)many Hi, I`m writting something over and over agian on this board. I used to play pingpong with another fresh man during lunch time. And then, we go to lunch as soon as playing pingpong is stopped. I used to feel so good when we eat any food as a meal after playing that. On having dinner, other researcher asked me to play that with me. As I knew, his techniqe is not good. I was going to play that and came my seat. As I guessed, I did not enjoy pingpong..... I am currently in my office to do something. As soon as this is done I will go home to take a rest.

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Hello^^ HAPPY TUESDAY! Great Job! you got a perfect score. Keep it up! I envy you because you do have time to play sports. I wish I also have the it.^^ Anyway, please do check the corrections below. Take care. See you in class tomorrow. ----T. Aurora   1)many >>correct 2)much >>correct 3)much >>correct 4)many >>correct 5)much >>correct 6)many >>correct 7)much >>correct 8)much >>correct 9)many >>correct 10)many>>correctHi, I`m writting something over and over agian on this board.>>correct!I used to play pingpong with another fresh man during lunch time. >>correct //  the word freshman should be written this way // And then, we go to lunch as soon as playing pingpong is stopped. >>And then, we eat lunch as soon as we finished playing pingpong. I used to feel so good when we eat any food as a meal after playing that.>>correctOn having dinner, other researcher asked me to play that with me. >> After having dinner, other researchers asked me to play pingpong with them. As I knew, his techniqe is not good. >>As I expected, his technique is not good. I was going to play that and came my seat. >>I was about to play that when he came to my seat. As I guessed, I did not enjoy pingpong.....>>correctI am currently in my office to do something. >>I am currently in my office doing something. As soon as this is done I will go home to take a rest. >>As soon as get this done, I will go home and take a rest.

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