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Nawadays, environment situation rapidly changes that let me see some examples. Middle East Asia counties like Dubai, Syria or others have not winter so that their citizens didn't see have snowing. But, a few months ago, those areas were snowing heavily.
How about USA? Some USA cities, now, suffer from flood and dry. That's the main reason food and vegetable price goes high. Becuase USA is one of the product country of wheat, corn or cereal etc.
How about the Russia?
Actually, Russia is very cold area but, temperature is more cold than before. Today, their normal winter temperature is -50 degree. I can't imagine how cold is.
How about China?? They suffer from earthquake that happen usaully Japan or East USA area before. I know many Chinese died by earthquake until now.
Those symptoms that environment maybe warns to people.
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Nawadays, environment situation rapidly changes that let me see some examples.
>>Nowadays, environmental conditions change rapidly. Let me cite some examples.
Middle East Asia counties like Dubai, Syria or others have not winter so that their citizens didn\'t see have snowing.
>>Middle East Asian countries like Dubai, Syria and others don\'t have Winter so people there haven\'t seen snow.
But, a few months ago, those areas were snowing heavily.
>>But a few months ago, it snowed heavily in those areas.How about USA? Some USA cities, now, suffer from flood and dry.
>>CORRECT!! In some cities in the USA, they are suffering from flood and drought.
That\'s the main reason food and vegetable price goes high. Becuase USA is one of the product country of wheat, corn or cereal etc.
>>That\'s the main reason why foods and vegetables\' price sore high. The USA is the source of wheat, corn, cereal and others.How about the Russia?
>>How about Russia?Actually, Russia is very cold area but, temperature is more cold than before.
>>Actually, Russia is a very cold area but the temperature now is colder than before.
Today, their normal winter temperature is -50 degree. I can\'t imagine how cold is.
>>CORRECT!! I can\'t imagine how cold that is.How about China?? They suffer from earthquake that happen usaully Japan or East USA area before.
>>CORRECT!! They suffered from earthquakes that usually happen in Japan or the Eastern part of the USA.
I know many Chinese died by earthquake until now.
>>I know many Chinese died because of that.Those symptoms that environment maybe warns to people.
>>Those are the signs that the environment is maybe warning the people.
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