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2013-01-23 · 첨삭 강사 Joan

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Homework for January 23, 2013 1. Why was there a large celebration on the River Thames this weekend? It was celebration for the Queen Elizabeth2's Diamond jubilee at the River Thames this weekend. 2. How was the weather on the day of the river pageant? It was a heavy rain and cool temperatures. Despite of bad weather, up to a million people gathered on the banks of the river. 3. Why does the report mention Monday and Tuesday? They will enjoy the celebration more longer than weekend, so they extend to Monday and Tuesday.

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Hi [이름]^^ Hoan your writing skills some more by studying these things closely^^  Good job! T. Joan Homework for January 23, 20131. Why was there a large celebration on the River Thames this weekend?It was celebration for the Queen Elizabeth2\'s Diamond jubilee at the RiverThames this weekend. >> It was because of the celebration for the Queen Elizabeth\'s Diamond jubilee at the RiverThames this weekend. OR>> People gathered at the riverbanks of the River Thames to watch a flotilla in honour of Queen Elizabeth\'s Diamond Jubilee.2. How was the weather on the day of the river pageant?It was a heavy rain and cool temperatures. Despite of bad weather, up to amillion people gathered on the banks of the river. >> There was a heavy rain and the weather was coold too. Despite the bad weather, up to amillion people gathered on the banks of the river.>>The weather was cold and rainy on the day of the river pageant.3. Why does the report mention Monday and Tuesday?They will enjoy the celebration more longer than weekend, so they extend to Monday and Tuesday. >>The report mentions Monday and Tuesday because the weekend was extended for two extra days in order for Diamond Jubilee celebrations to continue.

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