Homework
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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
In not more than 5 sentences, tell me about your possible activities in Korea during winter season.
We can have winter vacation.
make a snow man and doing snow fight.
and,ours traditional top-spinning game.
But I don't like winter.
It's very cold;;
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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:In not more than 5 sentences, tell me about your possible activities in Korea during winter season. We can have winter vacation.
>> Correct
>> OR One good thing why I like winter because of the \"winter vacation.\"make a snow man and doing snow fight.
>> I can make snow man and play snow fight.and,ours traditional top-spinning game.
>> We will play the traditional top-spinning game.
But I don\'t like winter.>> Correct
It\'s very cold;;
>> Correct
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