Homework 25

2016-08-01 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Going through our life, we have to make some choices. What do you think was the hardest choice you made? And why did you choose it? when i was 19 year-old, i had sick and entered a hospital. but i had to take a test for entering a university. However, i already passed other examination for university type. So i didn't need to take a test, but the exam can take only one time in life. That's why i had considered whether take a test or not. Finally i discharged form hospital and took a test. but i don't regret until now

강사 첨삭

Hi there my dear Sun!Happy Monday! How are you? Thank you so much for doing your homework... Great job! Take care always and have a great day! xoxoTeacher Cam^^ Going through our life, we have to make some choices. What do you think was the hardest choice you made? And why did you choose it?when i was 19 year-old, i had sick and entered a hospital. >>When I was 19 years old I got sick and entered a hospital. OR: When I was 19 years old I had an illness and was confined at the hospital. but i had to take a test for entering a university. >>correct OR: But at that time, I also had to take an entrance exam.However, i already passed other examination for university type.>>However, I already passed other entrams exams in other universities.So i didn\'t need to take a test, but the exam can take only one time in life.>>So I was not able to take a rest because we can only take the exam once.That\'s why i had considered whether take a test or not.>>That is why I had considered whether to take the test or not.Finally i discharged form hospital and took a test. >>Finally I got discharged from the hospital and took a rest. but i don\'t regret until now >>But I don\'t regret this.  

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