Homework 25
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Going through our life, we have to make some choices. What do you think was the hardest choice you made? And why did you choose it?
when i was 19 year-old, i had sick and entered a hospital. but i had to take a test for entering a university.
However, i already passed other examination for university type.
So i didn't need to take a test, but the exam can take only one time in life.
That's why i had considered whether take a test or not.
Finally i discharged form hospital and took a test. but i don't regret until now
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Going through our life, we have to make some choices. What do you think was the hardest choice you made? And why did you choose it?when i was 19 year-old, i had sick and entered a hospital.
>>When I was 19 years old I got sick and entered a hospital.
OR: When I was 19 years old I had an illness and was confined at the hospital.
but i had to take a test for entering a university. >>correct
OR: But at that time, I also had to take an entrance exam.However, i already passed other examination for university type.>>However, I already passed other entrams exams in other universities.So i didn\'t need to take a test, but the exam can take only one time in life.>>So I was not able to take a rest because we can only take the exam once.That\'s why i had considered whether take a test or not.>>That is why I had considered whether to take the test or not.Finally i discharged form hospital and took a test.
>>Finally I got discharged from the hospital and took a rest.
but i don\'t regret until now
>>But I don\'t regret this.
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