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I didn't achieve meaningful perform related to my field until now so, I try to effort to achieve. I think time is more need and 2~3 years later, some of my meaningful achievements will be advanced. I have continuously studied English and have read books for better perform in my field.
First of all, I already most meaningful achievement that is marriage. In our life, we have three the biggest events that birth, marriage and death. I have already experienced birth and marriage that feels are overwhelmed that I think you already know. Those things are not common in life so that we could feel excited.
Most meaningful perform or achievement must not be a big, it's up to you.
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I didn\'t achieve meaningful perform related to my field until now so, I try to effort to achieve.
>>I haven\'t achieved a meaningful performance related to my field until now so, I\'m exerting more effort to achieve it.
I think time is more need and 2~3 years later, some of my meaningful achievements will be advanced.
>>I think more time is needed and 2~3 years later, some of my meaningful achievements will be advanced.
I have continuously studied English and have read books for better perform in my field. >>I have continuously studied English and have read books to better perform in my field.
First of all, I already most meaningful achievement that is marriage.
>> First of all, I think the most meaningful achievement is marriage.
In our life, we have three the biggest events that birth, marriage and death.
>>In life, we have three biggest events such as birth, marriage and death.
I have already experienced birth and marriage that feels are overwhelmed that I think you already know.
>>I have already experienced birth and marriage that makes me feel overwhelmed that I think you already know.
Those things are not common in life so that we could feel excited.
>>Those things are not common in life that\'s why we feel excited. Most meaningful perform or achievement must not be a big, it\'s up to you.
>>The most meaningful performance or achievement must not be a big one, it\'s up to you.
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