Homework

2013-01-28 · 첨삭 강사 Dorcy

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Homework for January 25, 2013 1. Where did the shooting take place? The place of shooting was in Connecticut elementary school. or It took in Connecticut elementary school 'S[이름] Hook'. 2. What did teachers do try to protect students? They hid their students in closets and bathrooms. 3. What did the American president promise to do? He prevent something like schoolshooting from happen again.

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Homework for January 25, 2013
1. Where did the shooting take place?
The place of shooting was in Connecticut elementary school.
>> The place of the shooting was in a Connecticut elementary school.
or It took in Connecticut elementary school \'S[이름] Hook\'.

OR >> It took place in a Connecticut elementary school named \'S[이름] Hook\'.
2. What did teachers do try to protect students?
They hid their students in closets and bathrooms.
>> Correct.
3. What did the American president promise to do?
He prevent something like schoolshooting from happen again.

>> The American president promised to do whatever is in his power to prevent something like this school shooting from happening again.

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