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I have admired Steve Jobs since I know him. I think he was a genius because he had special talents of diffrent industies such as music, movie and IT. When he was 29, he was a millionaire by Apple computer, that was found by him, but, he was fired even though he was a founder. After he found another company, Pixar that related to movie industry. Pixar made first animation movie that Toy-stroy. It really big successed. After than that, he came back to Apple company that was almost bankrupt at that time. Since he came back, Apple computer changed their name that Apple and they developed innovative products like iMac, iPod and iPhone that we called i-series. Their products are most popular and famous in the world. Becuase of Steve Jobs, Apple is the most admired company and they have too much cash now. But, Steve Jobs died 2 years ago and I'm worried about Apple's future because their products, thesedays, are common and no innovation like other companies.

Hello there! You just got it perfect! If you want to improve your speaking/writing ability, read the example sentences in your dictionary. They show you how to use a word and they program your brain with correct English. ~T. Jeny^^ I have admired Steve Jobs since I know him. >>I already admired Steve Jobs eversince I knew him. I think he was a genius because he had special talents of diffrent industies such as music, movie and IT. >> I think he\'s  a genius man because of his talents in the field of music, movie and IT. When he was 29, he was a millionaire by Apple computer, that was found by him, but, he was fired even though he was a founder. >> When he was 29, he was a millioniare. Eventhough he has the founder of Apple computer he was fired. After he found another company, Pixar that related to movie industry. >> After that he found another company,\"Pixar\" which was also related to movie industry. Pixar made first animation movie that Toy-stroy. >> Pixar made the first animated movie entitled \"Toy story\". It really big successed. >> It was really a big success. After than that, he came back to Apple company that was almost bankrupt at that time. >> After which, he came back to Apple company that was at the midst od of bankcruptcy at that time. Since he came back, Apple computer changed their name that Apple and they developed innovative products like iMac, iPod and iPhone that we called i-series. >> Since he came back, Apple computer changed their name to Apple and they developed innovative products like iMac, iPod and iPhone that we called i-series. Their products are most popular and famous in the world. >> Correct Becuase of Steve Jobs, Apple is the most admired company and they have too much cash now. >> Bcause of Steve Jobs, Apple is the most admired company and the company is gaining a lot of profit now. But, Steve Jobs died 2 years ago and I\'m worried about Apple\'s future because their products, thesedays, are common and no innovation like other companies. >> Correct (Well said!^^)