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1. My strengths are smile and kindness. It makes other people comfortable. It is important to have a good feeling. However sometimes people ignore me because they feel too comfortable about me. I just treat people with kindness and consideration. Even I treat them with kindness they'll ignore me, I think they aren't deserve to receive my kindness. 2. My best present was from 1 to 4 series of Harry Potter. When I was twelve years old, my father gave to me. I read twenty times each book. Actually I believe Hogwarts is real and I expected I can go to Hogwarts. But I realized that is not real now.

Hi [이름], Wow, this is so nice, I think we have something in common, I think I’m kind and I love smiling too, hahah. Anyway, here are the corrections. See you tomorrow and have a great night, Connie My strengths are smile and kindness. >> My strengths are my smile and my kindness.  It makes other people comfortable. >> correct It is important to have a good feeling. >> Correct However sometimes people ignore me because they feel too comfortable about me. >> Correct  I just treat people with kindness and consideration. >> Correct  Even I treat them with kindness they'll ignore me, >> Correct I think they aren't deserve to receive my kindness. >> I think they don’t deserve my kindness.  My best present was from 1 to 4 series of Harry Potter. >> The best present that I’ve ever received was the Harry Potter series 1-4. When I was twelve years old, my father gave to me. >> correct >> My father gave that to me when I was twelve years old. -- better I read twenty times each book. >> I read that book for twenty times.  Actually, I believe Hogwarts is real and I expected I can go to Hogwarts. >> Correct But I realized that is not real now. >> Correct