homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi. Alice!
Last monday, I was sleeping when you call me. I felt flat when I wake up and notice that I missed your call.
You call me four times!!. I really sorry about that.
Anyway, today's homework!
I rememberd that I told you once, "Before Sunrise" is one of the my favorite movie.
So. today I will talk to another one.
Have you heard the "Life is beautiful"?
There is a Judea who named Guido. The movie shows man' life from his falling love to die of abusing of the Nazis.
his postive attitude of life tought me a lot of things.
I'm so depress that I couldn't expess my hole feeling of movie because of my english ability.
I strongly recommend that movie if you wouldn't see it.
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름]!
Thank you for sharing about this movie.
This is the second time I heard about its story. One of my students shared this to me yesterday and said it\'s also one quality movie. I hope to see that one of these days. ^^
Oh, I tried downloading the movie, Before Sunrise, but it so hard to find it. Haha!
Anyway, I hope you\'ll wait for my call later. Don\'t miss it, hihi. :)
Kindly check my corrections please... Catch you later, [이름]!
--Teacher Alice--
Hi, Alice!>> correct.
Last monday, I was sleeping when you call me.
>> Last Monday, I was sleeping when you called.
I felt flat when I wake up and notice that I missed your call.
>> I felt groggy when I woke up and I noticed that I missed your call.
You call me four times!!.
>> You called me four times!!^^kkk...
I really sorry about that.
>> I\'m really sorry about that. Anyway, today\'s homework!>> Anyway, here\'s my homework:
I rememberd that I told you once, \"Before Sunrise\" is one of the my favorite movie.
>> I told you once that my favorite movie is \"Before Sunrise\".
>> I remember that I told you once that \"Before Sunrise\" is one of my favorite movies.
So. today I will talk to another one.
>> Today, I\'m going to talk about another movie.
Have you heard the \"Life is beautiful\"?
>> Have you heard of \"Life is Beautiful\"?
There is a Judea who named Guido.
>> There\'s a Jew named Guido.
The movie shows man\' life from his falling love to die of abusing of the Nazis.
>> The movie showed the life of a man who fell in love and died in the arms of Nazis.
his postive attitude of life tought me a lot of things.
>> His positive attitude made me think a lot of things.
I\'m so depress that I couldn\'t expess my hole feeling of movie because of my english ability.
>> I\'m so depressed that I couldn\'t express my whole feelings for the movie because of my English ability.
I strongly recommend that movie if you wouldn\'t see it.
>> I strongly recommend you to watch the movie.
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