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2013-01-30 · 첨삭 강사 Alice

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Hi. Alice! Last monday, I was sleeping when you call me. I felt flat when I wake up and notice that I missed your call. You call me four times!!. I really sorry about that. Anyway, today's homework! I rememberd that I told you once, "Before Sunrise" is one of the my favorite movie. So. today I will talk to another one. Have you heard the "Life is beautiful"? There is a Judea who named Guido. The movie shows man' life from his falling love to die of abusing of the Nazis. his postive attitude of life tought me a lot of things. I'm so depress that I couldn't expess my hole feeling of movie because of my english ability. I strongly recommend that movie if you wouldn't see it.

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Hello there [이름]! Thank you for sharing about this movie. This is the second time I heard about its story. One of my students shared this to me yesterday and said it\'s also one quality movie. I hope to see that one of these days. ^^ Oh, I tried downloading the movie, Before Sunrise, but it so hard to find it. Haha! Anyway, I hope you\'ll wait for my call later. Don\'t miss it, hihi. :) Kindly check my corrections please... Catch you later, [이름]! --Teacher Alice-- Hi, Alice!>> correct. Last monday, I was sleeping when you call me. >>  Last Monday, I was sleeping when you called. I felt flat when I wake up and notice that I missed your call. >> I felt groggy when I woke up and I noticed that I missed your call. You call me four times!!. >> You called me four times!!^^kkk... I really sorry about that. >> I\'m really sorry about that. Anyway, today\'s homework!>> Anyway, here\'s my homework: I rememberd that I told you once, \"Before Sunrise\" is one of the my favorite movie. >> I told you once that my favorite movie is  \"Before Sunrise\". >> I remember that I told you once that \"Before Sunrise\" is one of my favorite movies. So. today I will talk to another one. >> Today, I\'m going to talk about another movie. Have you heard the \"Life is beautiful\"? >>  Have you heard of \"Life is Beautiful\"? There is a Judea who named Guido. >> There\'s a  Jew named Guido. The movie shows man\' life from his falling love to die of abusing of the Nazis. >>  The movie showed the life of a man who fell in love and died in the arms of Nazis. his postive attitude of life tought me a lot of things. >> His positive attitude made me think a lot of things. I\'m so depress that I couldn\'t expess my hole feeling of movie because of my english ability. >>  I\'m so depressed that I couldn\'t express my whole feelings for the movie because of my English ability. I strongly recommend that movie if you wouldn\'t see it. >> I strongly recommend you to watch the movie.

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