Homework

2013-01-31 · 첨삭 강사 Kate

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Please make a creative composition on the "What are some reason why privacy is important for you? Explain why?" I don't think so. privacy is important. but , my parents know for me. Because I'm not adult.

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 Hi, [이름]! Thank you so much for sending over your homework tonight. I hope you can send longer sentences next time, sweety. However, I appreciate your consistency. Talk to you soon! ~T.Kate^^ Here are my corrections for you: HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:Please make a creative composition on the \"What are some reason why privacy is important for you? Explain why?\"I don\'t think so. >> Correct >> OR I don\'t think privacy is really important.privacy is important but , my parents know for me. >> Privacy is somehow important, but my parents know all the things about me.Because I\'m not adult. >> Correct

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