Homework
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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Please make a creative composition on the "What are some reason why privacy is important for you? Explain why?"
I don't think so.
privacy is important.
but , my parents know for me.
Because I'm not adult.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Thank you so much for sending over your homework tonight. I hope you can send longer sentences next time, sweety. However, I appreciate your consistency. Talk to you soon!
~T.Kate^^
Here are my corrections for you:
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:Please make a creative composition on the \"What are some reason why privacy is important for you? Explain why?\"I don\'t think so.
>> Correct
>> OR I don\'t think privacy is really important.privacy is important but , my parents know for me.
>> Privacy is somehow important, but my parents know all the things about me.Because I\'m not adult.
>> Correct
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