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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: "What is your opinion about fortune telling?" - Actually, I'm very interested in fortune telling and I belive it. think our life is going by destiny. So, sometimes, it can be predicted. Of course, we should not follow fortune-telling blindly, it can be helpful to show us which way we have to go. *I have another request~ teacher! please correct my sentences~ - Hello, I’m one of the customers of your company, Gloria. I want to say something about your product which I bought. I had bought the computer from your company before a week. At first, I was very satisfied with it. But, passing by time, It started to not working very well. It takes a lot of time to turn on and off, and sometimes it freezes. I don’t know what is wrong with it. So, could you please examine my computer and repair it if it is necessary? I hope that I can be accessible to my well-working computer as soon as possible.

Hey there J! Happy Monday. Thanks for sending another wonderful composition. As for fortune telling, I\'m scared of it sometimes. Because I\'m afraid that it will predict many misfortunes especially about my love life. Hahaha. :) But anyway, I made the necessary corrections with regards to your sentences. Please go over them. Take Care! _Teacher Dorcy_- Actually, I\'m very interested in fortune telling and I belive it. >>Actually, I\'m very interested in fortune telling and I believe it.think our life is going by destiny.>>I think our life is predestined. So, sometimes, it can be predicted.>>Correct Of course, we should not follow fortune-telling blindly,it can be helpful to show us which way we have to go.>>Of course we should not fully believe and follow it, but it can be helpful in showing us which way we should go.*I have another request~ teacher! please correct my sentences~>>I have another request. Teacher,please correct my sentences.- Hello, I’m one of the customers of your company, Gloria.>>Correct I want to say something about your product which I bought.>>Correct I had bought the computer from your company before a week.>>I had bought the computer from your company a week ago.At first, I was very satisfied with it. >>Correct But, passing by time, It started to not working very well. >>But later on, it\'s no longer working very well.It takes a lot of time to turn on and off, and sometimes it freezes. >>It takes a lot of time to turn it on and off, and sometimes it freezes.I don’t know what is wrong with it. >>Correct So, could you please examine my computer and repair it if it is necessary?>>So, could you please examine my computer and repair it if necessary?I hope that I can be accessible to my well-working computer as soon as possible. >>I hope that I can be accesible to a well-working computer as soon as possible.