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2013-02-05 · 첨삭 강사 Joan

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February 4, 2013 Hundreds die in Brazil nightclub fire Comprehension Questions 1. Where did the fire break out? It was at the kiss nightclub in Santa Maria, Brazil. 2. What were the main causes of death for the victims? The main causes are the band's pyrotechnic show. It made a braze. 3. What did many of the concertgoers have in common? Many of them were university students.

강사 첨삭

Hello!!

Thank you for doing your homework.

It is already Tuesday...

Time really flies^^

Anyway, I want you to go over the corrections below.

Thanks and see you!^^

~Teacher Joan~

February 4, 2013
Hundreds die in Brazil nightclub fire
>>Hundreds Dies In Brazil Nightclub Fire
Comprehension Questions
1. Where did the fire break out?
It was at the kiss nightclub in Santa Maria, Brazil.
>>Correct!

OR >> The fire broke out in the Kiss nightclub in Santa Maria, Brazil.
2. What were the main causes of death for the victims?
The main causes are the band\'s pyrotechnic show. It made a braze.
>>Many of the victims died of smoke inhalation. Others were trampled to death.
3. What did many of the concertgoers have in common?
Many of them were university students.

>>Correct!

OR >> Many of the concertgoers were university students about to go back to school after their summer break.

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