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Hello [이름],

Please take note of your sentence construction.I love your stories knowing that you had a lot of experiences to talk about.

You do have a broad mind that\'s why I like talking to you. Keep expressing yourself cause tis could be an enhancing practice for you.

T.Jeny

When I went to Switzerland, I used a hostel that is cheap accommodation.

>>When I went to Switzerland, I stayed in a cheap hostel.

I met lots of people at there who from all over the world and we talked about information of travel and each counties\' culture.

>>I met a lot of people from all over the world and talked about their cultures and travel informations. 

It\'s very useful time for me because I learned about many counties\' life. 

>>It was very useful for me because I\'ve learn a lot about their lifestyles.

Especially, one guy, who came from South Africa, told us civil war of his country.

>>There is this one guy who is from South Africa, he told us about the civil war in his country.

He saw many corpses and some of his friends and near relatives died.

>>He saw his relatives and friends corpses.

At that time, he was very heartbreaking.

>>At that time, he was heartbroken.

Luckly, his family and he could escaped without any wound.

>>Luckily, he and his family escaped without being wounded.

His family lived in Germany now and he is studing in Bern.

>>His family is now living in Germany and he is studying in Bern.

Nevertheless, he experienced terrible happen in his young age, he is a positive and try to make smile other people. 

>>Even though  he experienced a terrible incident when he was young, he sees things positively and still tries to make people smile.

He was nice and humble so that me and he keeps in touch with until now even if it\'s not often.

>>He was nice and humble to me. We still keep in touch with each other though not that often.