Homework

Hi Klein~^^ Today I was so busy because of preparing some food for New year's day with my mother. I went the mart and bought fruits, vegetables, meats and fishes. It was a very tiring today. ㅠㅠ HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: How are you going to describe an exemplary working environment, contrary to a sweatshop? In my opinion, The exemplary working enviroment is an informal atmosphere in company. Everyone communicates with one another well. There's the place where many people who think "we are family and friend". And the work in place has all the modern amenities for employees. Most of important is the president's attitude of mind to confront employees. I think If there's harmoniously all of these, it's an exemplary working enviroment. I thought most of my shortcomings. When I read a sentence, I can't immediately translate and understand. Could you recommend some method? Good night Klein^^

A pleasant morning to you, Judy!

You certainly sounded tired in your composition.

How are you feeling now?

Is everything set for your new year celebration?

Well, regarding your problem,

it would be helpful if you are going to read a comic book.

This may sound a bit childish but in this way,

it would be much easier for you to get the gist of every character\'s dialogue with the aid of the pictures.

This is simply a training ground that may be of great help for you to understand more complex statements.

It may take time but with patience and persistence, you will soon overcome your weaknesses.

I am even glad that you really try to study hard.

You never miss to do your homework, where you can express what you have in mind.

I can then make some modifications and you can check on them as guide in polishing your grammar.

I hope that you had a good rest, Judy.

Catch you later!

_Teacher Klein

Hi Klein~^^

>>Correct!
Today I was so busy because of preparing some food for New year\'s day with my mother.

>>Correct!

OR >> I was busy with my mother preparing some food for New year\'s day.
I went the mart and bought fruits, vegetables, meats and fishes.

>> I went to the mart and bought fruits, vegetables, meat, and fishes.

It was a very tiring today. ㅠㅠ
>> It is a tiring day.

>> I am very tired today.
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
How are you going to describe an exemplary working environment, contrary to a sweatshop?
In my opinion, The exemplary working enviroment is an informal atmosphere in company.

>> In my opinion, an exemplary working environment is an informal state in a company.

Everyone communicates with one another well.

>>Correct!

There\'s the place where many people who think \"we are family and friend\".

>>There\'s the place where many people regarded everyone as part of their family or a friend.

And the work in place has all the modern amenities for employees.

>>And all the modern amenities for employess are present in the workplace.

Most of important is the president\'s attitude of mind to confront employees.

>> The most important thing is the president\'s attitude when confronting the employees.

I think If there\'s harmoniously all of these, it\'s an exemplary working enviroment.
>> I think that if all of these are in harmony, it can then be generally regarded as an exemplary working environment.
I thought most of my shortcomings.

>>Correct!

When I read a sentence, I can\'t immediately translate and understand.

>>When I read a sentence, I can\'t immediately translate and understand it.

Could you recommend some method?
>>Could you recommend some method on how I can overcome this?
Good night Klein^^

>>Correct!