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2013-02-07 · 첨삭 강사 Nikki

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February 6, 2013 Match-Fixing Rampant In Football Comprehension Questions 1. What did Europol uncover? Europol has uncovered a criminal network of match-fixing in football leagues in and outside Europe. 2. Who is involved in the crime? They are players, officials and member of an organized criminal network. 3. Why does the report mention England? The reason of mention England in this report is that it suggests a few match-fixing games in England.

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Hello!!

Thank you for doing your homework.

You did a fine job! Your answers are just right but of course, I still provided some other ways on how you can rephrase your statements.

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February 6, 2013
Match-Fixing Rampant In Football
Comprehension Questions
1. What did Europol uncover?
Europol has uncovered a criminal network of match-fixing in football leagues
in and outside Europe.
>>Correct!

OR >> Europol uncovered a criminal network related to match-fixing in football leagues around the world.
2. Who is involved in the crime?
They are players, officials and member of an organized criminal network.
>>Correct!

OR >> Players, officials, and criminals based out of Singapore are involved.
3. Why does the report mention England?
The reason of mention England in this report is that it suggests a few match-fixing games in England.

>>Correct!

OR >> The report mentions England because a few matches in England are under investigation in this match-fixing scandal.

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