Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello!!
Time sure flies! It\'s already Friday.^^
Thank you for sharing this to me. This sure is something. Perhaps, your father was just trying to teach you how to be independent and that he wants you to be strong.
He wants you to know that he won\'t always be right by your side whenever you will be put in such situations and so, you need to go through such on your own.
Maybe we can talk about this one in class^^
Have a great day!
Enjoy your New Year.^^
~Teacher Anne~
Talk about a frightening incident you had in not less than five sentences.
When I was a young child, I lost my way because I had slept in a bus. I remember that I was only eleven-year-old at that time.
>>When I was young, I was eleven years old at that time. I was lost because fell asleep in the bus.
I was really scared and confused where I am. So I called my father and talked about my trouble.
>>I was really scared and confused where I was, so I called my father and told him my situation/problem.
“Daddy, I don’t know where I am. Could you come here? I ‘m really scared.”
>>Correct!!
Actually, most of parents are really concerned when their child being in difficulty.
>>Actually, most parents are really concern when there children are in trouble.
I expected my father to take care of me and pick me up.
>>I expected my father to come and pick me up because he cares about me.
But my father said so simply
>>But my father simply said,
“You can come home alone. Take another bus.”
>>Correct!!
So I took another bus and came back home. That was a my most frightening happening.
>>So I took another bus and came back home. That was the most frightening incident that happened to me.
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