homework

Hello [이름],

I do agree that tourism is a big factor to improve a country\'s economy. Thank you for answering your homework and expressing your opinion about the topic. Have a nice holiday!!!!

T. Jeny

I\'m imterested in tourist industry so, if I have authority to change policies, I\'ll focused on diverse and more strong for tourist industry.

>>I\'m interested in the industry of tourism, if I have the authority to change policies, I\'ll focus on a diverse and strong tourism.

Tourist industry is very attractive because it\'s the way to learn other countries culture.

>>Tourism is very attractive because it is a way to learn other countries culture.

Hong-Kong or Swithzland where very popular places for travel earns too much money from tourist.

>>Hong Kong and Switzerland are very popular places for traveling and those countries are earning a lot of money from tourist.

I think Korea don\'t have special symbol or beautiful scen so we need to find it and try to develop.

>>I think Korea doesn\'t have a special tourist spot or beautiful scene, so we need to search and develop a place.

For comfortable travel, we need more simple transportations, to solve language problems etc.

>>To have a comfortable trip, we need simple transportation, to solve language problems.

If we have more welcome for foreigners, they\'ll have express warm Korea.

>>If we have more tourists , they will fell a warm welcome from Koreans.