homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
I wish the holiday was longer but sadly all good things have to last. I\'ll let you know how I spent my holiday in class later. I\'m happy you understood well the homework I gave you. Do you think there\'s any truth to babies being lucky if they\'re born on the year of the dragon? Maybe we could discuss that later as well. See you later in class.
T. Joan
My dear teacher joan
>>My dear teacher Joan,
I spent the lunar new year\'s holiday for 3 days in my homeland.
>>I spent the lunar new year\'s holiday for 3 days in my hometown. (Homeland is a term commonly referred to as your native land or your country. Unless you came from a different country and traveled back to Korea, then you may use homeland on your sentence.)
My homeland is Jeonju of famous for korea traditional food \'Bibipbop\'.
>>My hometown is Jeonju. It\'s famous for the Korean traditional food bibipbop.
I grew up at Jeonju until 23 years old.
>>Correct!
After I got a my work at Seoul, I leaved Jeonju.
>>I lived in Jeonju until I got a work in Seoul.
I had gone to Jeonju at 3 times in a year of lunar new year\'s day, Koean Thanksgiving Day and the anniversary of my father\'s death.
>>I go to Jeonju 3 times a year during the lunar new year\'s day, Korean Thanksgiving day and teh anniversary of my father\'s death
Anyway, I am tied of despite resting holidays.
(I\'m not exactly sure what you meant in this sentence. But here are my suggestions:)
>>Anyway, I\'m tied up despite of the holidays.
>>Anyway, I\'m tired despite resting during the holiday.
See our class, Good bye.
>>See you in our class. Goodbye!
<Homework>
1.Why is a baby boom expected in The Year of the Dragon?
They expected that if they borned in the Year of the Dragon, they will gain the wealth and success.
>>That\'s because they expect that a baby born on the year of the dragon will bring wealth and success.
>>A baby boom is expected in The Year of the Dragon because the dragon is considered the luckiest sign to be born under.
2. Why do many pregnant women from mainland china go to Hong Kong to give birth?
Many pregnant women want to avoid China\'s one child policy and want better quality services and aducation for their children.
>>Correct!
>>Many pregnant women from mainland China go to Hong Kong to give birth to avoid the one-child policy or to give their children better access to services.
3. Why do some teachers feel it is foolish to plan for a \'dragon baby\'?
Because they think the dragon babies will lose out on educational opportunities.
>>Correct!
>>Some teachers feel it is foolish to plan for a \'dragon baby\' because a baby boom will result in a loss of educational opportunity for those born during it.
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