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2013-02-12 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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If I could go back, I would like to go back when I was a high-school student. I had a friend interested in social problems. One day she told me that she would go to take part go on a demonstration, because Korean government supports for FTA illegaly. But just worring about her. So I opposited to her opinion and we had a big fight. After that day we ended our relationship, and I've never met her again. If I could go back to that day, I would apologized to her.

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Thank you so much in making your composition Helena! I felt a bit sad knowing that you had gone apart with your friend. have you tried reaching her out through facebook? ^^ We\'ll be talking more about that by tomorrow. --- T. Anne   If I could go back, I would like to go back when I was a high-school student. >> Correct!I had a friend interested in social problems. >> I had a friend that is interested in social problems. One day she told me that she would go to take part go on a demonstration, because Korean government supports for FTA illegaly. >> One day she told me that she would go to take part on a demonstration, because the Korean government supports FTA illegaly. But just worring about her. >> I was just worrying about her. So I opposited to her opinion and we had a big fight. >> So I opposed her opinion and we had a big fight. After that day we ended our relationship, and I\'ve never met her again. >> Correct! If I could go back to that day, I would apologized to her. >> If I could go back in that day, I would apologize to her.

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