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If I could go back, I would like to go back when I was a high-school student.
I had a friend interested in social problems. One day she told me that she would go to take part go on a demonstration, because Korean government supports for FTA illegaly. But just worring about her. So I opposited to her opinion and we had a big fight. After that day we ended our relationship, and I've never met her again. If I could go back to that day, I would apologized to her.
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Thank you so much in making your composition Helena!
I felt a bit sad knowing that you had gone apart with your friend.
have you tried reaching her out through facebook? ^^
We\'ll be talking more about that by tomorrow.
--- T. Anne
If I could go back, I would like to go back when I was a high-school student.
>> Correct!I had a friend interested in social problems.
>> I had a friend that is interested in social problems.
One day she told me that she would go to take part go on a demonstration, because Korean government supports for FTA illegaly.
>> One day she told me that she would go to take part on a demonstration, because the Korean government supports FTA illegaly.
But just worring about her.
>> I was just worrying about her.
So I opposited to her opinion and we had a big fight.
>> So I opposed her opinion and we had a big fight.
After that day we ended our relationship, and I\'ve never met her again.
>> Correct!
If I could go back to that day, I would apologized to her.
>> If I could go back in that day, I would apologize to her.
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