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2013-02-12 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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North Korea had 3rd nuclear test. North Korea taken worldwide condemnation. This nuclear test weaker than before. But, It bring about international concern. Naturally, Korea went on red alert. Such North Korea's provocation makes we nervous. If war will break out in Korea, It is beyond description. It will cause worldwide confusion.

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