Homework
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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Please make a creative composition on: "What was your most memorable Lunar New Year's celebration? Tell me more."
My most memorable Lunar New Year's celebration is 3years ago Lunar New Tear's.
Because that year is I entrance into a middle school.
I had lot of present.
But I like this years too.
I have mant present.
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Hi There, [이름]!Thank you for making your answer. You always put an extra effort in your lessons. I placed the corrections and the explanation for each mistakes. Keep up the good work! You made a very comprehensive answer.
~T. Kate^^
Here are my corrections for you:
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:Please make a creative composition on: \"What was your most memorable Lunar New Year\'s celebration? Tell me more.\" My most memorable Lunar New Year\'s celebration is 3years ago Lunar New Tear\'s.
>> My most memorable Lunar New Year\'s celebration I ever had was 3 yearss ago.
Because that year is I entrance into a middle school.
>> Because during that year is when I entered middle school.I had lot of present.>> I also had a lot of presents.
But I like this years too.
>> CorrectI have mant present.
>> I have a lot of presents.
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