Homework 26

2016-08-01 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Do you think it's necessary to have plastic surgery if you are famous in order to be successful? Give some examples. Many people make up their face, hair and cloth. Plastic surgery is a kind of the things. when you have plastic surgery, face will be better than before. But there are various method to improve your looks through changing your hair style or fashion. Also there are lots of people becoming famous not face but their talents likes talking ability, performance. if i want to famous to success, i don't doing this. because it will be short to keep famous. if you have time to do this, you have time to grow your inner ability.

강사 첨삭

HI my dear Sun, thank you so much for sending in your homework. I am always happy to find you eager in studying. Thank you for that. Take care and have a great day... xoxoTeacher Cam^^ Do you think it\'s necessary to have plastic surgery if you are famous in order to be successful? Give some examples.Many people make up their face, hair and cloth. >>Many people put on their make up, use fancy clothes. Plastic surgery is a kind of the things. when you have plastic surgery, face will be better than before. >>Plastic is the kind of thing. When you undergo plastic surgery you will get and feel better than before.But there are various method to improve your looks through changing your hair style or fashion. >>correct Also there are lots of people becoming famous not face but their talents likes talking ability, performance. >>Many people are becoming famous not because of their face but because of their abilities.if i want to famous to success, i don\'t doing this. because it will be short to keep famous. >>If I want to be famous, I won\'t do this because it\'s not good. if you have time to do this, you have time to grow your inner ability. >>correct

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