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It has been issued that Korea has a first female president in its political history. Adding with that, she has brought the economic issue into hot discussion. She specially emphasized the decocratic distribution in econony among her public pledges. Setting aside the economic growth, we belive in she will decrease the disparity, one of our social problems. Please check the following email sentence as well: I am resending the data of passport. As of today, the total number is 7 people, 6 from SBS and 1 from SKP. The final number will be set by tomorrow. I will deliver the final list by tomorrow as soon as I have their information. I am sorry to make you two to work twice because the total number is not set. I've just find that SBS has to cover own accomodation. Due to our company's policy for business trip, the rate of Panpacific Hotel is quite beyond of the budget. Beside that, we would like to inspect a hotel where model and staff can stay in June,experiencing in person prior.

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It has been issued that Korea has a first female president in its political history.

>>It has been issued that Korea has it\'s first female president in its political history.

 Adding with that, she has brought the economic issue into hot discussion.

>>Adding with that, she has brought the economic issue into a heated discussion.

>>In addition to that, she has brought the economic issue into a heated discussion.

 She specially emphasized the decocratic distribution in econony among her public pledges.

>>She specifically emphasized the democratic distribution in economy among her public pledges.

Setting aside the economic growth, we belive in she will decrease the disparity, one of our social problems.

>>Setting aside the economic growth, we believe that she will decrease the disparity, one of our social problems.
Please check the following email sentence as well: I am resending the data of passport.

>>Please check the following email sentences as well: I am resending the data of a passport.

As of today, the total number is 7 people, 6 from SBS and 1 from SKP.

>>As of today, the total number of people is 7, 6 from SBS and 1 from SKP.

The final number will be set by tomorrow.

>>The final number will be set by tomorrow.

>> The short list will be set by tomorrow.

 I will deliver the final list by tomorrow as soon as I have their information.

>>CORRECT!!

I am sorry to make you two to work twice because the total number is not set.

>>I am sorry for the inconvenience because the total number is not yet set. 
I\'ve just find that SBS has to cover own accomodation.

>>I\'ve just found out that SBS will to cover their own accommodation.

Due to our company\'s policy for business trip, the rate of Panpacific Hotel is quite beyond of the budget.

>>Due to our company\'s policy for business trips, the rate of Panpacific Hotel is quite beyond the budget.

Beside that, we would like to inspect a hotel where model and staff can stay in June,experiencing in person prior.

>>Besides that, we would like to inspect the hotel where models and staffs can stay in June,experiencing it in person prior.