homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I don't change my life now.Because,This life still happy.But,I will grown-up,I will want to little change my life.Example,I will study hard,continuously.I listen to advice and I will aim high.
Do you know [이름] Nan Se?He is famous conductor.Yesterday,I Saw orchestra.He conducted an orchestra.The musics are beautiful.I wanted you come there.I miss you
dear teacher alice.
강사 첨삭
Hello Tom!
Welcome back! Thank you for re-enrolling!^^
Oh my! I love watching and listening to the orchestra. I wish I was there too!
I miss you more sweetie but don\'t worry.
We\'ll talk really soon.
Anyway, my dear, you have to begin your message with \"Dear Teacher Alice\". Do not put this at the end of the message, it should be at the beginning.
See you later!
~Teacher Alice
>> Dear Teacher Alice
I don\'t change my life now.
>> I don\'t want to change my life now.
Because,This life still happy.
>> That is because, this life is still happy.
But,I will grown-up,I will want to little change my life.
>> But as I grow up, I want to change a little in my life.
Example,I will study hard,continuously.
>> Correct!
I listen to advice and I will aim high.
>> I will listen to other\'s advice and I will aim high.Do you know [이름] Nan Se?
>> Correct!
He is famous conductor.
>> He is a famous conductor.
Yesterday,I Saw orchestra.
>> Yesterday, I saw the orchestra.
He conducted an orchestra.
>> He conducted the orchestra.
The musics are beautiful.
>> The music is beautiful.
I wanted you come there.
>> I wanted you to go there.
I miss you
>> I miss you. *I miss you more!dear teacher alice.
>> Dear Teacher Alice, *This supposed to be at the very beginning of your message.
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